句式1:With +复合结构”又称为“with结构”
At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子,她就更加焦虑,心跳加速,脚出汗。
Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates tightly with tears rolling down her face.Jodie 激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。
1. 那女孩张大了嘴巴,打开了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+adj.open)
2. 女孩心怦怦直跳(beat wildly),打开(unwrap)了她的礼物盒。(with +宾语+分词)
3. 他的妻子伤心极了,眼里满是泪水(full of tears/filled with tears)
4. 那个人躺在地上,双手颤抖着。(on the ground, tremble)
The girl unwrapped the gift box with her mouth wide open.
The girl unwrapped the gift box with her heart beating wildly.
His wife was extremely sad, with eyes full of tears / with tears rolling down her face
句式2 :并列谓语,细化动作 A, B and C
When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时,朱迪深吸一口气,慢慢地走到起跑线上。
句式3 :句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随,原因或结果
Jodie wore her brand-new spikes, waiting for her turn nervously and anxiously. Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。
句式4 巧用生动的无灵主语: A strong/intense sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news.
描述心情的名词
happiness/joy/delight 开心
anger/rage/fury 狂怒
sadness/sorrow 悲伤
gratitude/appreciation 感激
admiration 钦佩/赞赏
guilt/remorse 愧疚悔恨
fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕
astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊
动词
seize
catch (caught过去式)
strike (struck 过去式)
surround
take hold of
wash over
come over
+sb.
句式5 :情感形容词+句子
Relieved(=breathing a sigh of relief), Eric thanked the man and switched the frequency back, “Mac, help is coming!” But there was no response.埃里克松了一口气,向那个人表示感谢,并将频率调回,“麦克,救命来了!”但没有回应。
Thrilled and joyful, Jodie hugged her teammates
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