主旨升华—助人型
在读后续写中传达积极向上的正能量,是取得高分的要素之一。主人公受到别人的帮助或者帮助别人,是续写的重要主题之一。运用以下两种技巧,轻松写出助人型的主旨升华句。
升华技巧一:
from then on+
行动
1. From then on, I would try my best to help sb. like sb. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起,我会尽我最大的努力去帮助某人。只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
【点评】本句表达积极帮助他人,并传递这种正能量属于升华了文章,且使用倒装句,故属于高级加分亮点句。
2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.
从那天起,每次我遇到需要帮助的人,我总是联系他们,希望把墨西哥家庭给我的善意传递给我。
3. From then on, I made up my mind to pass on
“
love
”
to others. Just as a saying goes:
“
Rose given and fragrance in hands.
”
从那时起,我就决定把
“
爱
”
传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说:
“
赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
”
4. From then on , Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way, could more and more people help each ot从那时起,伯纳德就决定去帮助那些需要帮助的人。只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
升华技巧二: 感动
+
感悟
1.【
2022
年
1
月浙江卷读后续写
】
From this project, we also learned the significance of
teammates
. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
从这个项目中,我们也了解到了队友的重要性。正如俗话说,一个人可以走得很远,但一群人可以走得更远。
2.【山东省潍坊市五县市
2022-2023
学年高三
10
月统考英语试题】
From the experience, I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor, which, therefore, inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.
、
从这些经验中,我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值,因此,这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。
3. I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around, which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋,眼泪毫无
高中英语读后续写:4种主旨升华的万能公式